Today’s visiting writer at the San Antonio Writing Project was the talented poet and teacher, Jenny Browne.
She had many wonderful ideas to share, so I’m posting my notes here.
The word “inspire” comes from the root meaning “to breathe in”
Yoga Breathing Exercise
The way we normally breathe only reaches one side of the brain; this exercise enables oxygen to reach both sides of the brain
Using your thumb to cover your right nostril and your pinkie to cover your left nostril, breathe in or out of one nostril at a time: in right, out left, in left, out right
Two sides of the brain: right/left
Two sides of your life: personal/professional
Two sides of your work: teacher/writer
Poetry Has Two Sides
Music and meaning matter equally
“Shhh” vs. “Be quiet” vs. “Shut up!”
The music makes the meaning feel differently
Jenny traveled to Sierra Leon as a volunteer, wanted to “save the world”
When you don’t understand the world around you, sometimes the best you can do is describe it
This began life-long devotion to paying attention
What questions to you have about reading poetry/writing poetry/teaching poetry?
What scares you? excites you? puzzles you? or intrigues you about poetry?
Poetry as a way of sparking students’ relationship to language
Poetry provides opportunity to magnify and clarify your relationship to the world
“You Must Revise Your Life” by William Stafford (essay in You Must Revise Your Life: Poets on Poetry)
Writing is a process that enable things to bubble up that you didn’t know that you knew
Poetry works best when it sneaks up on you
Openness vs. Expectation
“If you don’t live it, it won’t come out your horn.” ~Charlie Parker
Don’t be afraid of sounding like someone else
If another writer moves you, use it—chew it up, spit it out
“You can’t edit an empty page.” ~Jenny Browne
The Observation Deck from Naomi Epel, Interesting suggestions for 5 minute warm up exercises or foci for revision
Charles Wright was an admirer of Paul Cezanne and tried to write a poem that worked like Cezanne’s paintings do
Don’t start with a plan
So how do you start? Where do you start?
“We can travel by poem” ~Jane Hirschfield
The less we talk about how we feel and the more concretely we describe the things that make us feel that way, the better our poems will be.
Writing Exercises to Try
“The Poet” by Jane Hirschfield
The poet as the muse that’s always working, that we can listen to/access
Invocation exercise based on the poem: write 2 or 3 lines beginning with “Let . . .”
Single most musical tool in poetry is repetition (and change)
Poems move in patterns; there’s energy in change (Pink Panther theme song)
Some patterns aren’t so good, for example, repetitive sentence patterns
I Remember by Joe Brainard is 4,000 sentences all beginning with “I remember . . . ” (here’s an article about it on poets.org)
“I remember . . . ” prompt
Or to get at connections: What are 7 yellow things you saw yesterday? etc.
Ars Poetica (poem about poetry)
“The Triggering Town” by Richard Hugo talks about the real subject that reveals itself in the writing of the poem
“The Triggering Town” essay in Lectures and Essays on Poetry and Writing by Richard Hugo
Coleridge defines poetry as the “best words in the best order”
“Doves” by C. K. Williams—it’s about the words, the way things sound
Work backwards—instead of starting with ideas, start with words
Write down 5 words you like for the way they sound
Write a line or 2 that use a couple of those words
See where these words might take you
“The Summer Day” by Mary Oliver
Exercise based on this pattern from the poem:
“I don’t know . . ./I do know . . . ”
Williams Carlos Williams saw a poem as a large or small machine made out of words
What is a poem?
Jenny’s working definition: an individual response to one of the world’s unanswerable questions
Pablo Neruda’s Book of Questions—70 couplets
Is there a deeper truth in asking the questions?
Write 3 questions you’re carrying around with you.
Write questions—trade—have other students respond
TS Eliot said good poets borrow, great poets steal
“Now, That Is Summer” by Jenny Browne
Exercise: steal one of the following lines . . .
The makes a map of
There are moments I pretend
All I want is to
Someone looks up and says
In Il Postino, Neruda confronts the postman, “That’s my poem”
The postman says, “Yes, but I needed it”
William Carlos Williams’ mailman wrote a “So Much Depends . . .” poem
Keep a reading notebook
Asian Figures by W.S. Merwin, translated clichés from various languages—sound unique to us
Metaphor: taking 2 different things and rubbing them together, in doing so we learn something new about both, it creates new qualities for both
I see a
It looks like
Closing Moves
We’ve done 5 different exercises today:
Invocation exercise based on “The Poet” by Jane Hirschfield: lines beginning with “Let . . .”
5 words you like for the way they sound; a line or 2 that use a couple of those words
3 questions you’re carrying around with you
Stealing lines from “Now, That Is Summer” by Jenny Browne
Metaphors: I see a , It looks like
Drawing on all of them, see if you can piece together a draft of a poem
At the end of our time with Jenny we shared the poems she had helped us find, and, of course, they were wonderful. Thanks so much to Jenny for giving her time and inspiring energy to us today!
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